Neat! I like the take on the theme, and the idea of footsteps in the snow being a story of sorts. My biggest feedback is that it was a bit repetitive, as it felt like you were saying the same thing just with different words. I really liked the way you chose to end it though, great way to make the reader feel a part of the story!
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The lake of frozen echos's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Use of Theme | #1 | 5.000 | 5.000 |
| Jolt Factor (originality) | #2 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Overall | #2 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
| Writing Quality | #3 | 2.000 | 2.000 |
Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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