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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Subject Mater#44.0004.000
Game Length#53.0003.000
Design Clarity#52.0002.000
Creativity#63.0003.000
Supporting Materials#61.0001.000

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • UI, Art, and Animation: The current state of the UI, art, and animation appears rough and lacks polish. Improving the visual presentation is essential for creating a more immersive and aesthetically pleasing experience for players. Game Topic and Potential: The game's topic holds promise and could lend itself well to a survival or tower defense genre. Implementing a progression system with different weapons and defenses would add depth and longevity to the gameplay experience. Unintuitive Controls: One of the most critical issues identified is the unintuitive controls, which make the game unnecessarily difficult. Testing and refining the control scheme to ensure it is intuitive and responsive are essential for creating a fair and enjoyable experience for players. Lack of Context and Narrative Integration: Properly introducing context and integrating narrative elements are crucial for immersing players in the game world. Both textual and visual storytelling methods should be employed to provide players with a clear understanding of the game's setting, objectives, and motivations. Articulation of Design Beyond Survival: While the survival aspect is evident, the overall design beyond this core concept is not well articulated. Conducting an intense overhaul of the game's design to clarify objectives, mechanics, and progression pathways is necessary for creating a cohesive and engaging gameplay experience.

Team Name
Team Purple

Game Title
Ordon's Redoubt

Game Description
This game is a tribute to a poem by A. Mickiewicz by the same name,
I poeticaly tell the story of Julian Konstanty Ordon who was a Polish artillery officer in the 19th century who became famous after a heroic defense of a fort in Warsaw when the Russian Tsar invaded Poland in 1831.

In the game you play as Ordon and are tasked with operating a cannon (“Stepping upon it”) and shooting at waves of assaulting soldiers, while also managing your ammunition and reloading when needed.

Game Itch.io Link
https://michal-dylo.itch.io/ordons-redoubt

GitHub Link
https://github.com/ThePennitentOne/Ordons-Redoubt

Supporting Dicumantation
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yltCQmtomRMZl2B8rZJ7iynQCRc3C2MVTWnqSC01VLE/edit?usp=sharing

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