I like this story and art! The story and worldview are good, so it would have been better if it were easier to complete :)

Really loved your way of storytelling. I had a lot of fun playing even though the game is quite short.

Before the endboss fight against the slimeking started, during the dialogue I could move my character and jump off the platform into the white void. It wasn't really a problem because I got teleported to the fight after the dialogue, but it would be nice to fix that if you continue working on the game, which I would really encourage you to as it is a very nice concept.

The only things I would improve are collisions and some visual stuff. Sometimes the collision with a spike seemed unfair, I lost health while not really touching it. Maybe you could edit the hitbox of the obstacles to make them a little smaller, that would increase the fairness and fun in my opinion. 

And it would be nice if the spikes had an outline to easier distinguish them from the background.

Other then that it was a nice game and Ollie was really cute. The dialogues were nicely implemented as well.

(Ps. I would appreciate it if you could try out my game)

Keep up the good work (9-^)

It's a nice game !

Ollie is so cute with his little wings ! 

The graphics are incredible and the scenario is wonderful ! The music is really cool too :D

Congrats, you did very good work ;)

(maybe you could rate my game ?)

Ollie is a beast! Chill music and fun game, I enjoyed the platforming and watching Ollie shred those slimes. Nice graphics theme too, with all the slime everywhere.  

Beautiful story ! 

really fun, i enjoyed the story quite alot, just a glitch, its possible to have a negative hp and not die, else really cool!

I have enjoyed the journey.

Nice game but i had -35hp and i lived. Apart from that it's great!

Nice story

Encountered some bugs or unfinished mechanics, nice storytelling tho, all in all still a great job!