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A jam submission

The Adventures of FlatrickView game page

A line segment named Flatrick goes on an amazing journey into two dimensions.
Submitted by jennadamscodes — 6 minutes, 27 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Story#134.2214.221
Theme#174.4714.471
Fun#2743.2943.294
Aesthetics#2813.4563.456
Mechanics#4462.7942.794
Sound#7481.2501.250
Music#7571.2941.294

Ranked from 68 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How many people worked on this game total?
1

Did you use any existing assets? If so, list them below.
no

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Submitted

I wasn't really sure what to do when I saw the thing flickering, the story kind of stopped for me, I couldn't move anymore, I was quite enjoying it until I got trapped. Some Music / sound effects would have rounded this off perfectly!

Developer(+1)

Do you mean the part after you enter the portal? That's a cut scene and you have to press enter to advance the narration. Sorry if it wasn't super clear what to do! I wanted to implement timed hints to help prevent the player from getting stuck, but I ran out of time. I'm hoping to do voice over narration for the full version, though, so that will eliminate that problem. Thanks for playing and sharing your feedback!

Submitted

I think so, there was a circle, but I couldn't get near it, or away from it, I will give it another go, thanks for the hint :)

Timed hint or narration could be super useful, at least at the beginning or when you introduce something new. I totally get running out of time, we were all in that boat :D

Developer (1 edit) (+1)

Oh, the circle is a guide. It keeps moving away from you until you reach the portal. You just have to follow it. :) Sorry, that definitely could have been clearer! Thanks again for the feedback. :)

Submitted

ah! I think the lack of the grid/background up there didn't make it clear I was actually moving, which is probably why I thought I was stuck. Really cool project, I am looking forward to seeing more from it. 

Submitted

Wow, this game is amazing! 

I really was in the Flatrick's shoes. A simple story perfectly narrated!

Submitted

Great design and narrative! I thought life in 2d would be hard, but I never considered life in 1d as well, that's gotta be a little rough. I really enjoyed playing!

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