I don't know why but I keep reading the title as "Just A Transition" lol.
This one was cool, I like that the choices affect the next story sections. I wonder how big the story tree is... One thing I liked was how difficult it was to make choices. Like, I have my personal preferences and would lean towards choosing those, but you've laid the questions out so as to point out the ramifications of your choices, that they will impact other people and that you aren't just making decisions in a vacuum. Quite cool. The writing seems good too, I'm not much of a writer but everything felt well written to my inexperienced eyes. My only nitpicks would be that the decision text could've been spaced apart a bit, otherwise I had to highlight an option to see where it starts / ends, nothing major though. Nice message, Nice work :)
Thank you so much for the kind feedback! If you know what you're doing, I think you can see all of the story in two playthroughs - however, a couple of scenes are locked behind specific decision combos :)
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I don't know why but I keep reading the title as "Just A Transition" lol.
This one was cool, I like that the choices affect the next story sections. I wonder how big the story tree is... One thing I liked was how difficult it was to make choices. Like, I have my personal preferences and would lean towards choosing those, but you've laid the questions out so as to point out the ramifications of your choices, that they will impact other people and that you aren't just making decisions in a vacuum. Quite cool. The writing seems good too, I'm not much of a writer but everything felt well written to my inexperienced eyes. My only nitpicks would be that the decision text could've been spaced apart a bit, otherwise I had to highlight an option to see where it starts / ends, nothing major though. Nice message, Nice work :)
Thank you so much for the kind feedback! If you know what you're doing, I think you can see all of the story in two playthroughs - however, a couple of scenes are locked behind specific decision combos :)