I like this a lot! The interface is beautiful. What tool did you use? The writing style suits the mood, the light-reloading mechanic is simple yet effective. As I have replayed it several times, I'm not sure how priorities are sorted for the ending. It's enjoyable nonetheless. A good strike of pace and length.
You seem to have disabled commenting on your main project page. Is it intentional?
Ah, thank you! That's very kind! I used the new Chapbook format for Twine, which defaults to that interface. That's one reason I chose to try it. I didn't finish until the last moment, so the endings are just based on a few specific choices. I would like to write more nuanced and clearly attainable endings soon. Thank you for replaying it! I'm so glad it's enjoyable!
Oh, no, that's a mistake! I've fixed that now. I posted too hastily last night, and I've only used this website to play games before now. Thank you very much for your feedback!
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I like this a lot! The interface is beautiful. What tool did you use?
The writing style suits the mood, the light-reloading mechanic is simple yet effective.
As I have replayed it several times, I'm not sure how priorities are sorted for the ending. It's enjoyable nonetheless. A good strike of pace and length.
You seem to have disabled commenting on your main project page. Is it intentional?
Ah, thank you! That's very kind! I used the new Chapbook format for Twine, which defaults to that interface. That's one reason I chose to try it.
I didn't finish until the last moment, so the endings are just based on a few specific choices. I would like to write more nuanced and clearly attainable endings soon. Thank you for replaying it! I'm so glad it's enjoyable!
Oh, no, that's a mistake! I've fixed that now. I posted too hastily last night, and I've only used this website to play games before now. Thank you very much for your feedback!