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A jam submission

Class 315View game page

A love letter to an old train.
Submitted by Imo (@imo_veebooks) — 25 days, 19 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
IDEA | Was this game innovative, or did it use interesting mechanics?#1173.2664.000
MOOD | Did this game have atmosphere, or did it make you feel something?#1742.8583.500
VISUAL | Did this game have nice graphics, art or design?#2162.4493.000
AUDIO | Did this game have great music or sound design?#2212.0412.500
Overall#2232.3682.900
FUN | Was this game satisfying to play or did it bring you joy?#2871.2251.500

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Let people know how long this project has been going, or share a bit of its history.
I've been working on this in some way or another since April 2020, when in the grip of the first lockdown I would watch the trains pass my window rather than riding them myself. The class 315 trains were decommissioned on the overground in October 2020, and I felt it was about time I got this finished.

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Edit:

Short Video Story, My Opinion is from a Game Design POV not from the Story and Meaning of this Poem

The Poem is Good and the Content is also well Choosen.


Original:

mhh Not sure really what to say about.

It doesnt feel like something.

The Idea so far is cool, Videos as Visual Novel is interesting.

But u need more Content so it makes fun to Read the Story, More Choices and everything.

Developer

Hi! Thanks for your comment.  This is  a short poem presented in a visual and interactive way, and the choice I made to make it very small and simple was deliberate, so I don't need to add more content or choices as you might in a traditional game.  I'm posting this in case other people may read your feedback and feel like they can't share their work because it might not fit into a traditional  game style. Thanks!

Okay now i understand it more.

I Changed the Post a little for you.

Developer

thank you!