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A jam entry

ONE LAST NEON KISSView game page »

Is a virtual generated perfection worth more than a flawed reality?
Submitted by iurikato


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Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.


Jupiter_Hadley · 2 years ago

Nice game! I included it in part 15 of my Cyberpunk Jam compilation video series, if you have time to check it out :) http://youtu.be/6f27GLhimV4

A surprisingly large and detailed world. The descriptions of the visuals painted a very cool picture in my head, and I enjoyed the narrative's exploration of genderbending. The Cyber Drugs aspects was an amusing analogy to indie games / game development (Was the drug queen @deviever? XD).

Was a little difficult to understand at times, but forgivable as I don't think iurikato is a native English speaker.

I really enjoyed the parallel perspective mechanic in this narrative. Not only did it make the story more interesting, but it also allowed me to engage with the text in a much deeper, analytical way since I was constantly switching perspectives and comparing them to each other.

There were a few grammar mistakes, but overall the writing was fine and mostly understandable. Also, there was at least 1 or 2 instances of links that didn't go to a new page (when new lines would appear below the links) which seemed a little strange, though that might just be a limitation of Twine?

Anyway, great job! It was a fun story to read through.

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