have i told you enough times that i love reading snippets of your writing? the answer is no. im repeating myself, but damn seeing your writing like this really hammers home how impactful it is, how much emotion you can convey in these small fragments. the idea of comparing val pedro edric and morrow literally makes me lose it as well, they have such beautiful stories and you have always expressed them so well and reading them presented like this makes my brain go AHH! THEMES!! the formatting is beautiful too, its otherworldly in a way that really adds to the energy of the piece. the last page particularly. hh.