A lovely and creative idea--you've made a sort of living poem. You might want to consider using Twine's Jonah format for this, so that readers could easily see the passages they've selected all together when they're done. Overall, a nice submission.
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Uniqueness | #2 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Overall | #13 | 2.714 | 2.714 |
| Overall Quality | #19 | 2.571 | 2.571 |
| Scariness | #26 | 1.571 | 1.571 |
Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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