Hey, thanks for the nice comments, guys. I just really tried Twine in this, and the story was something I cooked in minutes... I'll definitely try making new ones, though. Twine is very interesting.

You made a very valiant effort to pack a lot of story into a very short word limit, but it would have been nice to have a few more choices. Still, I could see a longer version of this being interesting.

Interesting story. I included it in my Bite-Sized Horror Text Jam compilation video series, if you would like to take a look :) https://youtu.be/rerOewfTKnk