Hmm, really interesting, I'm not sure exactly how I'm going to handle this but I think in this world the relationship between succubi and humans is more symbiotic, with magic using humans parting with a small amount of power in exchange for the services the succubi provides. So they both take and give.
The artwork is great and I can definitely see this becoming a good NSFW game.I got this weird visual bug (windows) whenever she was sitting upright that would cut off her hair weirdly. I would also spring for a different font, it was hard to easily read and that's kind of important for a visual novel.
Sorry if I didn't explain clearly, the font loaded and stayed fine, I would suggest you look for a new font that's less blocky as it's hard to read. I understand it's part of the style but there are plenty of 16bit fonts out there that I think would keep the same style while being easier on the eyes, but that is my own personal preference so take it with a grain of salt.
Oh right, sorry I misunderstood, yeah you're right a better font is actually close to the top of my list, I just went with the first one I could find that was semi-legible. None of the other ones are great either so I'm going to make a custom one before I upload chapter 2.
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ah, good point about missing the animation, I'll have to adjust that.
In Russian "Давать" - means "to give". "Даваша" sounds like she is giving something. Aren't Succubi meant to take instead of give?
Hmm, really interesting, I'm not sure exactly how I'm going to handle this but I think in this world the relationship between succubi and humans is more symbiotic, with magic using humans parting with a small amount of power in exchange for the services the succubi provides. So they both take and give.
The artwork is great and I can definitely see this becoming a good NSFW game. I got this weird visual bug (windows) whenever she was sitting upright that would cut off her hair weirdly. I would also spring for a different font, it was hard to easily read and that's kind of important for a visual novel.
Dang! I think I know how to fix that visual bug but I don't know why it would be switching fonts. I'll have to look into that.
Sorry if I didn't explain clearly, the font loaded and stayed fine, I would suggest you look for a new font that's less blocky as it's hard to read. I understand it's part of the style but there are plenty of 16bit fonts out there that I think would keep the same style while being easier on the eyes, but that is my own personal preference so take it with a grain of salt.
Oh right, sorry I misunderstood, yeah you're right a better font is actually close to the top of my list, I just went with the first one I could find that was semi-legible. None of the other ones are great either so I'm going to make a custom one before I upload chapter 2.