There is a lot in this. I have been watching your progress for a while good work. I feel like the game would benefit a lot from having more focused demos. Perhaps for next time, just make one room, and polish up the battle system. Once thats done, make that room into a dungeon. After that, stick a town in, make the dungeon a quest and so forth. It sprawls in a lot of directions currently and its hard to give feedback. Everything feels like it has potential, nothing feels like it's really "there".