Not a lot to it, but nicely written! It definitely feels relatable, and I like her already! Her sprite is really nice. I guess if I had a criticism it's how small/far away the text box is from her face. Whilst reading I could see her expression flicker from the corner of my eye but would have to look up properly to register her face which didn't feel natural. If you look at a few screenshots of VNs they typically go for a knee or waist up portrait allowing the character to fill more of the screen and feel more connected.  

Good luck with development! <3