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A jam submission

Jeevan Pattar Graffiti Artist BaseView project page

Submitted by JeevanPattar — 2 days, 8 hours before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Presentation#24.2504.250
Documentation#54.0004.000
Creative#54.0004.000
Overall#63.8503.850
Research & Development#73.7503.750
Technical#123.2503.250

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • Research and development - Excellent depth of research and understanding of the concept. This was presented clearly and was easy to read. I have taken a star off for development as it would of been nice to see some different ideas/layouts thrown around in the concepting and block out phase.

    Technical - Technical challenge was well attempted and not outside the scope for the task. Car paint turned out nicely in UE4. I have taken a couple of stars off as I think your UV's could of been laid out better for the car body. The graffiti on the car itself was a little pixelated and this was a shame to see as the designs were very interesting. I also think your Post process could of been pushed a little more, especially the eye adaptation as this caused your scene to look overlay dark in some areas. I also think some of your PBR values are a little off, the floor and boxes were rather shiny and the normals were very strong, try and balance this in the future. An important part of a PBR workflow as well is to watch your white and black values, nothing is pure white or pure black and I think your tones were a little too strong on your graffiti on the walls.

    Creative - I liked the theme of the piece and could see the story this told without reading the initial description. I have taken a star off as I think you could of pushed the alternative personality of the artists ego a lot further.

    Documentation - Documentation was well presented and easy to read, I have taken a star off as I would of liked to of seen your lighting setup explained a little more.

    Presentation - Presentation was excellent and couldn't be faulted. Pictures were easy to view and the downloadable scene worked as intended.

  • A really nice piece with a lot of story telling. This piece shows a lot of individual elements but all tied together well in a cohesive way. 

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