I was reading through and found a few minor typos.
-Page 3, second to last para, "we focus in" focus on
-Page 6, 3rd para, "indulge on" indulge in
-Page 13, Despondent Leadership, "After someone gain" gains
-Page 16, last para, missing punctuation at the end.
-Page 29, right side, "After an adventure end" ends
-Page 44, last para left side, "good number that allow" allows
The game itself is super cool, although chunks of the text feel a bit like they're more aimed at veteran roleplayers.
The list of other systems to try in the back of the book is also a really neat addition.