yes yes yes!!!!! thank you so much for the feed back
you literally have given me motivation to work on this more
so with what you said that I want to just make sure I understand correct is
- new possible font (that might be a bit hard I've never done it before but I'll see what's possible)
- more personality for the charecter (totally get it I'll go back and look into the writing see if I can change it around)
- and finally grammar and spelling stuff (It was only a rough draft when I made it so you commenting that is kinda funny as it was never proof read in the first place)
if you think I could improve anything else at all please let me know!!!