This game has potential, you did a great job with the environment and i your art. As a player, i recommend you to make the interactive objects more noticeable and you could make a shadow for the characther. However, this is a great proyect, and you are very talented.
Thanks for playing. Appreciate the feedback. Yeah, the game could be a bit longer with more advanced storyline, but for the time dedicated to this, it is enough and unfortunately I can't update it at this moment. Will definitely consider your suggestions for the next projects. Cheers!
Hey there! This was a really good game. The premise was simple, yet solid. and multiple endings! I also maybe possibly... speedran it. it was that good. I'd like to see someone beat my time ;) your's is third on the list!
Another great game! You have quite the creative mind, I really enjoy your style. This one definitely got quite disturbing so quickly, at least my interpretation of it
I'm impressed that this was made in 4 days! I had fun playing it :)) the last bits of the game really creeped me out. Looking forward to more atmospheric horror from you!
Huge thanks for playing my game. I really appreciate the detailed feedback about the sound design, worked hard on that one, compare to the rest of things, so it paid off I guess. Wish all the best to you ✨
Game starts at 6:30 really good interesting take love the advance into it getting darker and darker as i realize what this game is about highly recommend playing fr or watching me play if interested :)
Fifth and final for the sampler. Another banger with that slow slide into the surreal. Great work Niven. While as a trashbear I feel my perfect spot is the dumpster, this is terrific as a micro min build, your getting a lot across with very little. I particularly like the statue routine.
You are amazing! Thanks again and again for the continuous support, it truly means a world to me. Hope to bring something better and longer next time, although I am super lazy, so can't tell lol. Cheers!
Why would you make it so you start the game by your car, your character drove to the grave site/starting area for a reason - you walk to the marker at the end of the grave site, only to be told you 'Forgot your shovel in your car' to force a player to waste their time to go back for a shovel instead of starting the game having the character tell the player that he needs the shove he clearly brought with him?
I don't think wasting players time with these types of redundancies is too smart and would suggest avoiding those pointless backtracking gimmicks.
Thanks for playing. I do appreciate the feedback. If I may, I can explain the "plot" in more detail. Basically, what you said is practically true - why don't get the shovel right from the start and force the player to go back and get it, true. But, there are 2 major factors you might be missing - first, you play as a serial killer, not a regular character. The story dictates your actions, which is why the game is a narrative driven, interactive fiction, and that's the way I designed the story to flow. Second and frankly the most important part - the character is choosing a perfect spot. Notice how in the task it doesn't say - dig a site right up front, because the character has to decide if this is indeed the perfect spot or not. Actually, there was a plan to have a third ending, where you just go back to the car and drive off, because you don't like this spot, so yeah.
And, in general, this entire game is a pointless backtracking gimmick mate, it was made in 4 days lol. Sorry if the game disappointed you. I will make sure to work hard on the next one. All the best to you ✌ Edit: Deeply apologize for the game being bad, honestly. This is just a small project, more of a warm up than something worthwhile and again, I fully understand if you didn't like it. Thanks for the feedback, it really, really means a lot.
Your comment really made my day! Thanks for calling my work "brilliant". I know it is indeed nothing special, but at least it is a good time waster lol. Best to you ✨
Thank you! I know sometimes people want to play more, have a longer version, but I do agree that short games are fun too. Glad that you liked this. Cheers!
Good game, thanks Niven, the previous game I played from this developer is Incoherence. It was also great, I wish you success with the development of new games!
Thanks for playing! Appreciate the feedback. They are short due to me giving less time to game developments, you know and of course me being lazy - that's a problem lol. Hope to fix it with the upcoming projects. Best to you!
Tho it was a short adventure i was enthralled and i advocate on these kinds of stories so that one day indie developers have the recocnition they deserve, im pleased to have indulge in this story you have created.
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This game has potential, you did a great job with the environment and i your art. As a player, i recommend you to make the interactive objects more noticeable and you could make a shadow for the characther. However, this is a great proyect, and you are very talented.
Thanks for playing. Appreciate the feedback.
Yeah, the game could be a bit longer with more advanced storyline, but for the time dedicated to this, it is enough and unfortunately I can't update it at this moment. Will definitely consider your suggestions for the next projects. Cheers!
I also maybe possibly... speedran it. it was that good. I'd like to see someone beat my time ;) your's is third on the list!
Thanks a lot for playing my game. Appreciate the feedback. The video was awesome, indeed. Best to you!
Another great game! You have quite the creative mind, I really enjoy your style. This one definitely got quite disturbing so quickly, at least my interpretation of it
Looking forward to the next one!Your feedback truly means a lot - thanks a bunch for such nice comments, it really motivated me to create more and different. Wish all the best ✨
Great Game!
Thanks for playing! Glad that you liked it. Cheers!
Huge thanks for playing my game. I really appreciate the detailed feedback about the sound design, worked hard on that one, compare to the rest of things, so it paid off I guess. Wish all the best to you ✨
Decent Killer's Remorse Game.
Great short summary for the game lol, thanks! Appreciate the feedback. Best to you and your channel, more subs!
Huge thanks for playing! Glad that you liked it man, all the best to you ✨
Anytime man and all the best to you as well homie!!
Really good work on this game, this makes me want to try out the other games the person made
Thanks! Your feedback means a lot. Glad that my game was able to entertain you. Appreciate the support mate, cheers ✨
What an interesting game you have made, good work!
Thank you, so very, very much for playing my game. I deeply appreciate the feedback and the video, it was great, yeah. Best to you!
This game was twisted in the best way possible!
Thank you so much! Glad that you liked the game, it wasn't too big, but something worth playing I presume lol. Best to you friend!
Indeed not a fun picnic time lol! Thanks a bunch for playing. Liked the video a lot. Best to you!
This was fun, my dude
Love your work!
Not as fun as watching your playthrough haha! Seriously, your videos are great. Thanks for playing ✨
You are amazing! Thanks again and again for the continuous support, it truly means a world to me. Hope to bring something better and longer next time, although I am super lazy, so can't tell lol. Cheers!
Your works always solid Niven. Which is a big help when I come up a game short or pull one a might bit too spicy for you tube. Look forward to it
Your video was great! Loved the edits. Thanks for playing, once again. All the best to you!
Great video! Thanks for playing, once again. Wish all the best to you and your channel. Cheers!
This game was pretty fun tbh - I'd like a sequel where the statue is like a weeping angel and follows you around but I'd play a sequel regardless
I would definitely sit on the idea of making a weeping angel type of story, yes! Thanks for playing once again. Best to you!
A weeping angel type story would be SO COOL!
Of course! Thank you for making the game and even watching my video! Best to you as well!
Screamer was good, and I love the idea of playing for "bad guy"! Wait for new games!
Thanks for playing, once again! Hope to bring more content soon, definitely. All the best to you ✌
Thank you! Thanks a bunch! Glad that you liked it ✨✨
Why would you make it so you start the game by your car, your character drove to the grave site/starting area for a reason - you walk to the marker at the end of the grave site, only to be told you 'Forgot your shovel in your car' to force a player to waste their time to go back for a shovel instead of starting the game having the character tell the player that he needs the shove he clearly brought with him?
I don't think wasting players time with these types of redundancies is too smart and would suggest avoiding those pointless backtracking gimmicks.
Thanks for playing. I do appreciate the feedback. If I may, I can explain the "plot" in more detail. Basically, what you said is practically true - why don't get the shovel right from the start and force the player to go back and get it, true. But, there are 2 major factors you might be missing - first, you play as a serial killer, not a regular character. The story dictates your actions, which is why the game is a narrative driven, interactive fiction, and that's the way I designed the story to flow. Second and frankly the most important part - the character is choosing a perfect spot. Notice how in the task it doesn't say - dig a site right up front, because the character has to decide if this is indeed the perfect spot or not. Actually, there was a plan to have a third ending, where you just go back to the car and drive off, because you don't like this spot, so yeah.
And, in general, this entire game is a pointless backtracking gimmick mate, it was made in 4 days lol. Sorry if the game disappointed you. I will make sure to work hard on the next one. All the best to you ✌
Edit: Deeply apologize for the game being bad, honestly. This is just a small project, more of a warm up than something worthwhile and again, I fully understand if you didn't like it. Thanks for the feedback, it really, really means a lot.
Fair nuff!
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Perfect game
Thanks for playing! Your feedback means a lot, really. All the best to you and your channel!
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Еhanks a lot !!!
This was brilliant! The atmosphere was great, and the storyline really had me intrigued. I'm looking forward to playing more from you! Thank-you ☺️
Your comment really made my day! Thanks for calling my work "brilliant". I know it is indeed nothing special, but at least it is a good time waster lol. Best to you ✨
Perfect Spot, Lamp Post, Incoherence, & Many More! This Dev knows how to MAKE a HORROR Game! Keep it up!!
Thanks once again for playing and thanks for posting the comment on the game's page, means a lot. Best to you and your channel!
hell yeah
Thank you! Your feedback really means a lot. Hope I can impress you with the next game, as well. Best to you ✨
Nice Game! I like short horror games like this!
Thank you! I know sometimes people want to play more, have a longer version, but I do agree that short games are fun too. Glad that you liked this. Cheers!
good
Thanks! Glad that you liked it. Best to you ✌
I loved it! Great atmosphere and intriguing storyline!
Likewise, I LOOVED the video! Thanks for playing ✨
loved coming up with my own theory for this game!! thanks as always niven!
Thank you for playing! Your support means a lot. Glad that you liked the game overall. Cheers!
I put up another short for this, the full video is attached to it. <3
Lmao, the shorts are fantastic! 😅😅😅Thank you!
Good game, thanks Niven, the previous game I played from this developer is Incoherence. It was also great, I wish you success with the development of new games!
Huge thanks for your kinds words, it truly means a lot. I will try to make better games next time, promise. All the best to you as well. Cheers!
Kinda Cool but wish there was more scares
Thanks for playing. I will try to include more scares I guess. All the best to you!
Nice horror game, but it's too short. 3/5.
Thanks for playing! Appreciate the feedback. They are short due to me giving less time to game developments, you know and of course me being lazy - that's a problem lol. Hope to fix it with the upcoming projects. Best to you!
Pretty good short horror game
Thanks for the feedback. Glad that you liked it ✨
also pls sub, great game overall
Thanks for such a deep dive into the lore, yeah, liked that a lot. Wish all the best to you and your channel! Thanks for playing!
I liked it, it was short but effective. I just wish the endings would've been longer, since the story was so interesting! ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ ) 7/10
Thanks for playing! Appreciate the feedback. Yeah, sometimes I get lazy with short games, but I promise to improve. Best to you!
Haha, great comment!
Thanks for playing, once again 🙌🙌🙌
Thanks for playing, as always 💝
Repent your killing ways and recieve forgiveness..(and jail time)
True, we shall repent lol!
Thanks for playing, once again. All the best to you friend. Gonna shop for some headphones soon lol
Thank you! Glad that you found this scary, I tried haha. Good job on the video as well. Best to you ✌
You're welcome! Thank you for the kind words about the video. Wishing you all the best too!
lol
Thanks for playing, once again! Cheers ✨
I found the perfect spot and regreted it. got all ending's (unless there's more than 2) and made a video. Great game 👍
Thanks for playing! Appreciate the support. Best to you!