Other than that no errors I can see! Proof reading is rough sometimes orz btw i played hustle cat when it first came out and have been waiting for you guys to announce a new game! You can bet on me buying/funding the kickstarter for this one! (already on your patreon!)
Also since this is an r18 I'm curious, some of the BL games I've played you can choose to top or bottom regardless of route, are you thinking of somethings similiar or are routes prerendered?