I am absolutely loving the game so far! You did an excellent job with, well, everything. I love the weird, the fun, and the sexy. I can't wait to get deeper in ;). I feel I still have a lot to experience in this version.
One small thing I did notice is *spoiler* the first time giving Makoto a hand, she says she doesn't like to wear underwear when wearing leggings. In the repeated version of this scene, it says you pull down her leggings and her underwear goes with it. Just a tiny, no nonsense thing but I figured I'd let you know because I would want to if I were in your position.
If that is the only criticism, you must be doing well! Keep up the great work.