I really like this game so far, and not just for the sake of horny.
For one, I actually think the lack of periods in dialogue works surprisingly well, though I don't know how intentional it is.
The main thing, though, is how... shameless things are. Aiden's anger/horny issues are a good example; I love seeing a character wear their joys and desires on their sleeve, without feeling like they're putting on an act.
It sorta feels like it celebrates sexuality in and of itself, I guess you could say? And even most adult games don't actually do that.
Never have I ever experienced such an amazing story, it has the perfect ballence of everything that I love in a game like this, a good narrative, awesome sexy characters with diverse personalities and a very interesting yet lewd world, I honestly CANNOT wait until the next chapter ^w^
I really enjoyed what you have so far. The Characters are really fun and can't wait to get to know them more as you go through the rest of the story. I Really enjoyed Aiden's story so far . If you plan on having more routes later then I cant wait to start romancing the other guys hopefully that will include the Headmaster lol he's really hot and I think a route for him would be a whirlwind lol. Thank you for an amazing start to this story!
I love the art and the plot so far is interesting enough, but there's a lot of typos and grammatical errors that ruin the experience a bit. The writing is okay, and i love the humor. I still enjoyed it though and waiting so bad for Aiden's dick(s) and Dallan's route!
My first play on this, It was fun, I thought you couldn't have sex and form a bond with the headmaster, but I'm very happy you can. I wonder if more fine-looking dudes are coming, I love to meet them if they're as hot as the lion daddy. I got a severe vibe of Happy Potter when he set the rules. I hope you have relationship buildings in the future and explore outside. That twist at the end was unexpected; now we know why Aiden had daddy issues.
Great start. Fun characters, funny dialogue and banter, great art. Looking forward to MC getting his ass destroyed by the nightfallen and Aiden. Literally the only thing that could improve what's already here for me is if the characters had animal dicks, but that's just personal preference.
I only progressed a bit to the quote-unquote "practice" section and so far I will be brutally honest in my opinion it's on par with Repeat my favourite Visual Novel, please keep up this greatly written novel. I have huge fun lording all the akward situations over Scribbles. I love tearing down the walls of beings with MASSIVE egos.
Edit: I have finished chapter 1 and my opinion has not changed, a nice light story, nothing too heavy unlike Repeat but just enough intrigue to keep me on the edge of my seat. I look forward to chapter 2 and on and the other routes.
I enjoyed the first build quite a bit! I can't wait for what you have next in store (that meaning next chapters/routes).
You've got a great main characters' dynamics and the story is enjoyable as well! I've found some spelling mistakes, but it wasn't anything severe that made me lose the sense of the sentence.
This VN is absolutely amazing! It has a perfect balance of humor, wholesomeness and horni. I'd even say that this might be one of my 3 favorite VNs of all time that share the same #1 spot. i can't wait to see how this game will go in the future and i hope there won't be any problems in development. I also have a few questions:
1) What is the current update schedule? Every few weeks, a month or multiple months?
2) Will there be TBS fighting mechanics while in a battle against the nigthfallen?
3) Who is the next character in line to get a path? I hope it's Tate hehe ;3
hi there, being in top 3 in someone's list is always great ^^
As for your questions:
1. I'm working on this vn alone so it really depends on how fast I compose the script and make the art, but it should receive an update at least once every 2-3 months as long as the support continues here or on Patreon.
2. Not very likely, it's not a bad idea, and if it turns out to be easier to make than it seems, then maybe, and I mean a BIG maybe.
3. I can't say who will be next, but on my Patreon there is a poll that ends in a couple of days to vote on the next path, if you want to give Tate a better chance, consider voting there ;)
your game is awesome, humor, emotion and characters with a really nice personality (and design) I loved it and I'm really in a hurry to find my little tiger ❤
The art style is very fitting, while its desirable to let he player input a name, I like there to also be a default name to fallback on, we get to have a full but incomplete view of the MC, that makes me VERY happy! Now I know exactly what to envision the MC looking like! Not just a feline, but a Snep! Yay! Any feline would do fur me, but Snep is new! ^^ oh! Would love to see that 2 months ago photo or well the "true" looks, not sure which, heh ^^;,
He doesn't like fish??? Blasphemy!!! XD
Metajokes! XD and a beautiful compromise! In just the fashion I like it!
WWoof!
That was killer, mood, introduction, but priceless! Just how I like it! ^^
Pfff! hahaha too bad the CG is only Chibi, but its also perfect like it to! XD One idea is if you ever make a non chibi version, can show both!
Is this end of meet choice for rest of VN or just CH1? I feel its too soon to lock in a route, we have only just met them. We have a good gasp by now of some of their personalities and quirks, but what we know is still all superficial. I would rather have the chance to know more about each of them, an example or taste of what they have to offer, like some of their simple hopes, dreams, thoughts, etc. Once locked in then delve into more deep and personal ones.
Either way that a cleaver meta redirect! I'll come back for you handsome! I got another one to chase! Oh and will Shard choice and Relationship Route be independent? Would allow for some more flexibility, would only need slight edits and a few bigger ones compared to a pure combo.
Yeah that feels really wrong, to have it stated that the choice was made long ago, predetermined, thus set in stone against ANY forces, yet the player gets to choose it based on a arbitrary choice of crush, before even getting to know ANY of them better? It doesn't compute properly. It is cute, but this seems way too rushed as hell!!!
Ung... family name too? This really ought to be done for us, as it stands to be much winder ranged and open than a first name...
Oh wow that was an excellent choice of song!
I would like to know what that new kitty looks like!
That ending wow! I'd ask more questions but here is not the place, for major spoiler.
Damn.. once again I'm going to have to choose between them! D:, I want them all!... so I guess multiple save files then? hehehe...
Big issue though to keep mention Humans and Humanity when none of the characters are even Human, let alone all Human. Will need to change this descriptor!
In all cases review what I have said and judge as you see fit on their level of merit against how much effort/work would be involved for suggested changes. I would not say anything has really happened that breaks the logic flow established, and for that reason things don't have to be changed.
Just saying. My favourite visual novel so far. I like all the characters honestly. Can't wait for more content or paths to be brought out. I don't mind which route is being made but I will be waiting for the Dallan route :)
Fun game. Good art. Good music. Interesting characters. Amusing story. Had more humor then I was expecting. Also, a bit too silly at time, at least in my opinion.
There was also one major plot point that I was not a fan of. It didn't make sense given what we know of the world. At the same time it's such a major plot point it has to happen. I'm just not a fan of how it was handled.
It sure made a strong first impression but one that stuck the landing. The setting and sense of humor are my cup of tea, and I really needed to read something lighthearted. I'll definitely keep an eye for updates.
Well, this game is certainly something. Below is my short review of different aspects of the game. The review is my perception of the game, and may be different to anyone else's views.
Let's start with the writing and story. The story itself is somewhat generic, though I do not find it to be much of an issue considering that this is supposed to be a silly horny VN. The writing as some noted isn't perfect, though most of the spelling mistakes aren't detrimental to the story, just something that catches your eye.
The characters. They are amazing. From the design and personality standpoint my favorite is Tate, though Aiden himself isn't the worst looking, nor the most basic of characters, and I enjoyed his route. The bulky wolf (whatever his name is) is somewhat forgettable in the demo as you don't really interract with him a whole lot. As a sidenote the player character is an absolute cutie.
The art. As I said before the characters are very unique in design and personality, which is a feat since it feels like every month we get new VNs with similar premises to this one. The differentiating feature of this VN is deffinitely the art. The emotions are portrayed by the sprites quite well, and overall the scenes look good.
To sum up my opinion (which isn't probably worth a whole lot tbh) this VN has a lot more potential that majority of stuff on this site. I'd place it on the same level as dawn chorus in its overall quality (Dawn chorus is also an amazing VN, check it out). I am truly excited to see where the development will lead, and how it will progress. If I could voice my wishes for future updates it would be a Tate route, and perhaps a route for the wolf, just so the playerbase could get a better understanding of the characters.
edit; To clarify my last point, I mean as in all the characters will get a chapter 1 route before anyone of them progresses into chapter 2. Allowing players to get more personal with characters would allow the dev(s) to better see whom the playerbase wants to see more.
Hi, thanks for taking the time to write such a detailed review, I'm glad you like the art and everything ^^ The game was supposed to be a 20-30 minute play at first, with a very fast paced and simple story that focuses only on the nsfw aspect, then I added more to the story, more characters etc. and decided to just make a more serious game, so I definitely get the generic part.
As for characters, rest assure that the main ones will get their path completed before chapter 2, in fact, on my patreon you can even vote on who's path I focus on next!
Ok this game is way better than I expected! The story is fun, characters are all interesting, lots of great art, great sprites too. The character dynamics are great and the choices were quite fun too. There's a few typos and some common ones like "quiet" instead of "quite" but I wouldn't worry too much. These aren't the type of mistakes that detract from the story a lot. Also the spicy stuff is top notch too, cough.
I was initially not interested in the tiger but he won me over quickly. So honestly kinda thankful his route was the only one there right now because otherwise i'd have went with the wolf sensei and completely ignored the kitty.
I'll try spread the word a bit. I hope we can get regular updates even if they take longer. The chapter 1 was absolutely massive, I think it took me 3 hours to read all?
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I really like this game so far, and not just for the sake of horny.
For one, I actually think the lack of periods in dialogue works surprisingly well, though I don't know how intentional it is.
The main thing, though, is how... shameless things are. Aiden's anger/horny issues are a good example; I love seeing a character wear their joys and desires on their sleeve, without feeling like they're putting on an act.
It sorta feels like it celebrates sexuality in and of itself, I guess you could say? And even most adult games don't actually do that.
Never have I ever experienced such an amazing story, it has the perfect ballence of everything that I love in a game like this, a good narrative, awesome sexy characters with diverse personalities and a very interesting yet lewd world, I honestly CANNOT wait until the next chapter ^w^
this was amazing, exceeded my expectations and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter
this game somehow likes harry porter but way more horny and furry
This VN is Amazing! A few spelling mistakes but was still really enjoyable! I look forward to future updates!
This VN is Marvelous I love it can't wait for more updates.
WoW, your VN is amazing
im really liking this so im really look forward to this next update and story as well as more art
I really enjoyed what you have so far. The Characters are really fun and can't wait to get to know them more as you go through the rest of the story. I Really enjoyed Aiden's story so far . If you plan on having more routes later then I cant wait to start romancing the other guys hopefully that will include the Headmaster lol he's really hot and I think a route for him would be a whirlwind lol. Thank you for an amazing start to this story!
Very enjoyable read! I love MC's silly monolgue and looking forward for more to come.
I love the art and the plot so far is interesting enough, but there's a lot of typos and grammatical errors that ruin the experience a bit. The writing is okay, and i love the humor. I still enjoyed it though and waiting so bad for Aiden's dick(s) and Dallan's route!
Amazing so far. I am really looking forward to the full version
Dallan need belly rubs
Your vn is amazing
My first play on this, It was fun, I thought you couldn't have sex and form a bond with the headmaster, but I'm very happy you can. I wonder if more fine-looking dudes are coming, I love to meet them if they're as hot as the lion daddy. I got a severe vibe of Happy Potter when he set the rules. I hope you have relationship buildings in the future and explore outside. That twist at the end was unexpected; now we know why Aiden had daddy issues.
Wow, that is a lot more content than I expected! Wonderful job!
Great start. Fun characters, funny dialogue and banter, great art. Looking forward to MC getting his ass destroyed by the nightfallen and Aiden. Literally the only thing that could improve what's already here for me is if the characters had animal dicks, but that's just personal preference.
I only progressed a bit to the quote-unquote "practice" section and so far I will be brutally honest in my opinion it's on par with Repeat my favourite Visual Novel, please keep up this greatly written novel. I have huge fun lording all the akward situations over Scribbles. I love tearing down the walls of beings with MASSIVE egos.
Edit: I have finished chapter 1 and my opinion has not changed, a nice light story, nothing too heavy unlike Repeat but just enough intrigue to keep me on the edge of my seat. I look forward to chapter 2 and on and the other routes.
just looking at the art ,its straight fire
just the art alone makes me wanna read this
EVERYTHING about Lust Shards is Incredible! \>o</ a real masterpiece in the making~! :P amazing work all 'round! :D
Dallan is best boi~ n///n
Aiden and Dallan are my favorite. The MC may be awkward but he’s cute and good looking snow leopard. I can see why the boys are attracted to him.
Can't wait to see more Aiden and check out Dallan's route
I enjoyed the first build quite a bit! I can't wait for what you have next in store (that meaning next chapters/routes).
You've got a great main characters' dynamics and the story is enjoyable as well! I've found some spelling mistakes, but it wasn't anything severe that made me lose the sense of the sentence.
Thank you for this ^^
Everything in this game is awesome. I liked it a lot and hope to see more
This VN is absolutely amazing! It has a perfect balance of humor, wholesomeness and horni. I'd even say that this might be one of my 3 favorite VNs of all time that share the same #1 spot. i can't wait to see how this game will go in the future and i hope there won't be any problems in development. I also have a few questions:
1) What is the current update schedule? Every few weeks, a month or multiple months?
2) Will there be TBS fighting mechanics while in a battle against the nigthfallen?
3) Who is the next character in line to get a path? I hope it's Tate hehe ;3
hi there, being in top 3 in someone's list is always great ^^
As for your questions:
1. I'm working on this vn alone so it really depends on how fast I compose the script and make the art, but it should receive an update at least once every 2-3 months as long as the support continues here or on Patreon.
2. Not very likely, it's not a bad idea, and if it turns out to be easier to make than it seems, then maybe, and I mean a BIG maybe.
3. I can't say who will be next, but on my Patreon there is a poll that ends in a couple of days to vote on the next path, if you want to give Tate a better chance, consider voting there ;)
Im now in love with this Vn cant wait for the updates :D
your game is awesome, humor, emotion and characters with a really nice personality (and design) I loved it and I'm really in a hurry to find my little tiger ❤
Wow I really love this vn I'm excited for next update
The art style is very fitting, while its desirable to let he player input a name, I like there to also be a default name to fallback on, we get to have a full but incomplete view of the MC, that makes me VERY happy! Now I know exactly what to envision the MC looking like! Not just a feline, but a Snep! Yay! Any feline would do fur me, but Snep is new! ^^ oh! Would love to see that 2 months ago photo or well the "true" looks, not sure which, heh ^^;,
He doesn't like fish??? Blasphemy!!! XD
Metajokes! XD and a beautiful compromise! In just the fashion I like it!
WWoof!
That was killer, mood, introduction, but priceless! Just how I like it! ^^
Pfff! hahaha too bad the CG is only Chibi, but its also perfect like it to! XD One idea is if you ever make a non chibi version, can show both!
Is this end of meet choice for rest of VN or just CH1? I feel its too soon to lock in a route, we have only just met them. We have a good gasp by now of some of their personalities and quirks, but what we know is still all superficial. I would rather have the chance to know more about each of them, an example or taste of what they have to offer, like some of their simple hopes, dreams, thoughts, etc. Once locked in then delve into more deep and personal ones.
Either way that a cleaver meta redirect! I'll come back for you handsome! I got another one to chase! Oh and will Shard choice and Relationship Route be independent? Would allow for some more flexibility, would only need slight edits and a few bigger ones compared to a pure combo.
Yeah that feels really wrong, to have it stated that the choice was made long ago, predetermined, thus set in stone against ANY forces, yet the player gets to choose it based on a arbitrary choice of crush, before even getting to know ANY of them better? It doesn't compute properly. It is cute, but this seems way too rushed as hell!!!
Ung... family name too? This really ought to be done for us, as it stands to be much winder ranged and open than a first name...
Oh wow that was an excellent choice of song!
I would like to know what that new kitty looks like!
That ending wow! I'd ask more questions but here is not the place, for major spoiler.
Damn.. once again I'm going to have to choose between them! D:, I want them all!... so I guess multiple save files then? hehehe...
Big issue though to keep mention Humans and Humanity when none of the characters are even Human, let alone all Human. Will need to change this descriptor!
In all cases review what I have said and judge as you see fit on their level of merit against how much effort/work would be involved for suggested changes. I would not say anything has really happened that breaks the logic flow established, and for that reason things don't have to be changed.
IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS...lately so many good games has been given up/hiatus...i really hope this one doesnt have that same fate. im so interested.
This VN has massive potential, I hope it gets the backing it deserves and isn't abused.
А что по поводу русского языка на андроид???
Unfortunately, that most likely will never happen unless a dedicated fan decides to take their time and translate the whole script
Боюсь, учитывая незаслуженное, в общем-то, отношение большей части мира к русским, переводить придется самому:)
Does each choice matter a lot or not cause if yes Is there a choice guide?
The choices do matter in some extent although only 2-3 of them are game changing, and no, there is no guide
Just saying. My favourite visual novel so far. I like all the characters honestly. Can't wait for more content or paths to be brought out. I don't mind which route is being made but I will be waiting for the Dallan route :)
I love this game. I hope it continues
Fun game. Good art. Good music. Interesting characters. Amusing story. Had more humor then I was expecting. Also, a bit too silly at time, at least in my opinion.
There was also one major plot point that I was not a fan of. It didn't make sense given what we know of the world. At the same time it's such a major plot point it has to happen. I'm just not a fan of how it was handled.
Either way, looking forward to more.
It sure made a strong first impression but one that stuck the landing. The setting and sense of humor are my cup of tea, and I really needed to read something lighthearted. I'll definitely keep an eye for updates.
I love the game it's fun to play
Well, this game is certainly something. Below is my short review of different aspects of the game. The review is my perception of the game, and may be different to anyone else's views.
Let's start with the writing and story. The story itself is somewhat generic, though I do not find it to be much of an issue considering that this is supposed to be a silly horny VN. The writing as some noted isn't perfect, though most of the spelling mistakes aren't detrimental to the story, just something that catches your eye.
The characters. They are amazing. From the design and personality standpoint my favorite is Tate, though Aiden himself isn't the worst looking, nor the most basic of characters, and I enjoyed his route. The bulky wolf (whatever his name is) is somewhat forgettable in the demo as you don't really interract with him a whole lot. As a sidenote the player character is an absolute cutie.
The art. As I said before the characters are very unique in design and personality, which is a feat since it feels like every month we get new VNs with similar premises to this one. The differentiating feature of this VN is deffinitely the art. The emotions are portrayed by the sprites quite well, and overall the scenes look good.
To sum up my opinion (which isn't probably worth a whole lot tbh) this VN has a lot more potential that majority of stuff on this site. I'd place it on the same level as dawn chorus in its overall quality (Dawn chorus is also an amazing VN, check it out). I am truly excited to see where the development will lead, and how it will progress. If I could voice my wishes for future updates it would be a Tate route, and perhaps a route for the wolf, just so the playerbase could get a better understanding of the characters.
edit; To clarify my last point, I mean as in all the characters will get a chapter 1 route before anyone of them progresses into chapter 2. Allowing players to get more personal with characters would allow the dev(s) to better see whom the playerbase wants to see more.
Overall rating;
9.8/10
Hi, thanks for taking the time to write such a detailed review, I'm glad you like the art and everything ^^ The game was supposed to be a 20-30 minute play at first, with a very fast paced and simple story that focuses only on the nsfw aspect, then I added more to the story, more characters etc. and decided to just make a more serious game, so I definitely get the generic part.
As for characters, rest assure that the main ones will get their path completed before chapter 2, in fact, on my patreon you can even vote on who's path I focus on next!
Ok this game is way better than I expected! The story is fun, characters are all interesting, lots of great art, great sprites too. The character dynamics are great and the choices were quite fun too. There's a few typos and some common ones like "quiet" instead of "quite" but I wouldn't worry too much. These aren't the type of mistakes that detract from the story a lot. Also the spicy stuff is top notch too, cough.
I was initially not interested in the tiger but he won me over quickly. So honestly kinda thankful his route was the only one there right now because otherwise i'd have went with the wolf sensei and completely ignored the kitty.
I'll try spread the word a bit. I hope we can get regular updates even if they take longer. The chapter 1 was absolutely massive, I think it took me 3 hours to read all?
Good stuff.
I dont really know what to say to be honest. This game is so great, and I cant wait for an update