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A jam submission

Nightmare PalaceView project page

A living palace nestled parasitically among a decrepit wasteland deep inside the dream lands
Submitted by Elmo La Mantia — 8 hours, 13 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Creative Development#193.0003.000
Final Presentation#193.0003.000
Overall#342.7002.700
Technical / Workflow#342.0002.000
Project Documentation#353.0003.000
Research + Development#352.5002.500

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

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  • Hi Elmo An interesting scene and I like the construction notes along with your reference. I also like that there is some subtle animation for the veins in the entire scene. Here are some of my notes: 1. I'd like to see some more obvious pulsating of the veins that is done in worldspace - so it looks like the entire walling / flooring are connectd to each other. 2. This is a scene that could benefit alot from smaller details - such as greeble or even some irregular variations. Right now it's reading a bit too uniform 3. I have some concerns about the fog planes you use here - there are a lot of overlapping planes that would be an overdraw & performance nightmare. I'd try cutting it down a bit because in production this is something I would flag as a blocker. Good stuff otherwise!

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I like the vibe a lot! Great piece! 

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