Hello Kraguto,
My name is Ido, and I really enjoyed playing the game you created, but I did notice the translation and storytelling weren't the best.
I would love to help if you need it (if you agree to let me help, I would take a volunteer position for this, meaning I would help as much as I can when I'm free and that I don't expect to be paid or anything, we can talk specific hours as well if you want).
Please let me know if you're interested in my help because I would be happy to help.