Easily one of my favorite visual novels even if it's not finished. Love the characters, each one have their own charm and are amazing in their own way (The sorcerer will always be my favourite however). It's a shame that it's only a demo, I could play it for hours non-stop! Normaly I get bored with all the text, but the M.C. has a great personality and the scenes are very well written, making me very hooked to the storyline, wich by the way it's also very interesting. 

I think that a nice detail to add would be more customization. The M.C is really pretty, but it would be a nice touch. Also, if possible, a tranlation to portuguese would be amazing. I'm brazilian and I know a lot of people who would love this game, but don't speak english. The animations underwater are a bit slower, but I haven't seen glitches.

I really hope to see this game finished! Love what you are doing, I will recomend this game to everyone looking a good visual novel!