Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

• Congratulations on finishing your film. The story was really well told and had some lovely animation.
• Great storytelling along with a nice simple aesthetic style. Can see this on a kids tv channel. Animation is linear but the timing works well and pacing throughout the story is well executed. Secondary animation and more fluid movement may be something to add in if it works with the style of animation you are creating. Great work.
• I liked your film very much!
• Nice concept and one obviously close to the animator's heart. The sentiment carried through, but could have benefited from some sound design, not just music. Character designs bit lumpy overall and some jerky movement, stiff work with limbs. The escape scene with th water bottle nozzle wasn't clear, though liked the Macgyver style. Well edited.
• Great hard hitting storyline in regards to animal testing and cruelty. Lovely drawings, your love and passion for animals really comes through. Some shots seemed a little long, maybe cut a few scenes down slightly. To keep it punchey and even more hard hitting. Overall great work!