Wow, this was so cool. I really loved how the actions done in the real world also affected your dreams. It would be nice if there was more clarity as to which scenes took place in the real world or the dream world, however, as it can get a bit confusing at times. Aside from that, great job!

A good narrative, dreamlike and mysterious with more meaning revealed with every scene. The artwork is really cool, especially after seeing it incorporated into the narrative through the sketching motive.

The interplay between the waking and dream world was very poignant. With it being set on a ship at sea, which is already a liminal environment, while being a stressed worker on a sentimental mission does play with your mind a bit.  The lone fisherman appearing in the third space between those two was a nice touch. Well done! 

I liked the sound effect for entering the dream--very ominous. I loved the art too! I think it fits the tone of the game well. I enjoyed playing through it. 😊

Nice writing and story design. So creepy and captivating! 🚢

I liked how the sequences were designed so that you could easily try again if you failed. Like if it's a dream, you could return to sleep, experience the same dream, and try a different choice. Very nice. 👍

The background drawings were also great! Wonderful perspective compositions! And good job of re-using the same pictures but inverting the colors or just changing a few elements to make for a completely different scene (e.g, aristocrats' party vs the kid's birthday party). Good job! 🖼️