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- Really nice use of color and fog, very atmospheric. What I would encourage you to think about is what story the items in your scene tell. The wolf is big imposing and obviously the star. The grave is a mysterious beacon for this wolf. The dead deer, adds to the wolfs grisly existance. But the spider...what does the spider do? He felt out of place compared to the rest of the scene.
Link to Portals game
https://theportal.to/?room=71c1a97d-fd23-4fdc-8c2b-4f27c7e4b108
Which IP did you primarily use?
TRANSFORMATION OF THE WOLF
What is your discord ID?
_seeone_
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3D Artist
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Nice Map! tho I can't seem to look around or move my camera, and would have been way better if the fog was blue instead of red. I'm personally rating each entry and for yours I rated it a 7/10