https://carta-mundus.itch.io/mountain-of-the-worm-god

I made this zine taking inspiration from brazilian RPG magazines that featured solo cyoa quests of about 40 entries.

I find that today many really dont want to read long blocks of texts, it slows the pace and people just dont seem to have the old attention spam anymore.

Can someone take a look and see how it plays out? Is it okay for an introductory tale?

I want to make a series continuing the story and enhanging the game features, do you guys have any suggestions?