Ahh! Another VN Dev.  A person of culture, I see. 

It was entertaining and compelling. Also, that door sound scared the hell outta me, which is pretty rare since I'm a horror vn dev xD

Not a lot of feedback to give at this point, but the opening passages did intrigue me and I found myself wondering how it tied into the story with the kids. I would have liked a little more detail about the school situation, there was a certain suspension of disbelief having the teachers confiscate the kids' phones while also essentially abandoning them. The logistics confused me a little. Also there was a bit of a readability issue with that light grey gradient, I'd recommend a flat colour that contrasts well with the text colour.

Admittedly, I was not sure what to make of this one. While this is partially to be expected of a particularly work-in-progress project, it feels like a large portion of the currently finished route has been dedicated to setup for other plot points. There are so many topics and details that get put on your plate in quick succession, and it's rather overwhelming, if you ask me. 

That being said, there's a very interesting setup here. The strange introductory dialogue from Chaos leaves me with questions that I want answered, and some of the character interaction does feel like there's a fair amount of room for some interesting character stories to be forged. Picking the route that you take from the start is also an interesting wrinkle that I'm curious to see developed further. 

Keep it up! I'll have to keep my eyes peeled on this one.