Overall, for only taking 48 hours to put together, a solid short.
Quick to play, but a bit difficult to follow at times. There was just some writing flow that made it feel like perhaps English is a second language.
Such as:
"My hot chocolate, fine, accompanied by the beautiful moon." What were you attempting to get across by adding "fine" to the sentence. I stared at it for a bit trying to understand what this sentence was trying to say.
"A still liquid, adjusting to its mother frame." Is an example where the word choice felt a bit unnatural making it seem like a translation disconnect.
Otherwise the pay off with the adorable CG was very nice.
I was left a bit confused on what actually happened in the bad ending, considering what we learn in the good ending.
Spoiler below!!!!
Do you die in your sleep? Or is it a real event one way, but only a dream the other? I was just a bit confused.
Edit addition: Also, why does the earthquake melt the snow? Wouldn't it cause an avalanche? I was a bit confused why the room was filling with water and not snow.
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