Very interesting. Made me read the short story, and thought you captured the essence of the story well. It's a little mechanically repetitive, which drags the game out a little. This is a minor criticism though. The art is quite nice, and I enjoyed your fleshing out of the worlds other than the Veldt. 

Cool game, I enjoyed it. I included it in part one of my WATHTA Jam compilation video series, if you'd like to check it out :) http://youtu.be/5h7zeqGbXes