The story is amazing and it certanly inspired me to start a project using ren'py! Can't say much about it since the game is all about the story but the sprites are beautiful. The only negative point I have is that sometimes the characters have animation for speaking and sometimes not but that doesn't make the game bad!
This is our updated version, featuring such novelties as proper spelling, improved (by way of actually working) animation, better dialog handling, and cleaner progression. The mystery is the same, but the experience should be a lot cleaner than our jam version.