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Describe the improvement that you have been working for this jam
I want to finish all the images for the game and do the sound design. I'm also trying to finalise the dialogue.
Describe your game in one sentence
This is a visual novel about a girl and her grandfather.
What feedback are you looking for
I am not yet satisfied with the dialogues. I would like to improve the English texts in particular. I would be very happy to receive feedback on how understandable it is, what other things I could point out in the dialogue, what grammatical errors there might be. Apart from that, if there are any bugs or comments on the pictures, I would be grateful.
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