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A jam submission

The Journey BackView game page

Submitted by DavidBarta — 12 days, 4 hours before the deadline
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The submission period of this jam has not ended yet. Rating opens 2025-04-30 17:00:00. You will be able to rate this entry if you submit to this jam.

Describe the improvement that you have been working for this jam
I want to finish all the images for the game and do the sound design. I'm also trying to finalise the dialogue.

Describe your game in one sentence
This is a visual novel about a girl and her grandfather.

What feedback are you looking for
I am not yet satisfied with the dialogues. I would like to improve the English texts in particular. I would be very happy to receive feedback on how understandable it is, what other things I could point out in the dialogue, what grammatical errors there might be. Apart from that, if there are any bugs or comments on the pictures, I would be grateful.

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