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A jam submission

Metal MilitiaView project page

My submission for 2023's Search for a Star project (Character)
Submitted by Kyperiss
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Research + Development#15.0005.000
Project Documentation#15.0005.000
Overall#24.7004.700
Technical / Workflow#24.5004.500
Creative Development#54.5004.500
Final Presentation#94.5004.500

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • Contestant: Kipras Stankevičius / @Kyperiss Assessor: Tristan McGuire / @Draconic_Cowboy Tier: Search For A Star Congrats on completing your project! Things that went well: ✧ Great initial research and concept creation. ✧ Nice Zbrush pipeline, including use of Zmodeller, Dynamic subdibv, IMM brushes and layers for baking. ✧ Effective use of stacking and mirroring UVs. ✧ Nice topology, particularly the face and hands. Things to consider next time: ✧ Even though you chose to make a stylised character, the face would have still benefited with a bit more attention to detail in the facial anatomy. ✧ Really nice start with the UVs. These could have been optimised even further with additional straightening and slight adjustments to the packing. ✧ As you already highlighted in your doc, the hair cards do look a lot like planes. Whether working on a stylised or realistic model, take a look at some hair card breakdowns to see the techniques that are used to stop the cards being flat looking. I hope this feedback proves useful and will help you with future projects and building your portfolio. You can find me on the social medias in the link below. Feel free to reach out in the future. All the best! https://draconic-cowboy.carrd.co/ - Tristan, Character Artist at Airship Interactive.

Challenge Tier

Search For A Star

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