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A jam submission

ApsaraView game page

Submitted by kpranav21 — 17 minutes, 39 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Research + Development#293.5003.500
Project Documentation#472.5002.500
Overall#542.0002.000
Final Presentation#551.0001.000
Technical / Workflow#551.0001.000
Creative Development#552.0002.000

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • Contestant: @kpranav21 Assessor: Tristan McGuire / @Draconic_Cowboy Tier: Rising Star Congrats on creating something for the competition! It is clear that this entry is unfinished, so feedback can only be quite limited. But I am so glad to see you did submit an entry. Well done :) Things that went well: ✧ Great to see use of reference imagery and then the creation of a unique concept. ✧ Drawing skills are great. Nice use of confident line work and communication of weight. Things to consider next time: ✧ I assume the project is unfinished due to lack of time, so next time you do a project, ensure enough planning is done and time allocated to complete the project right through to making a game ready model and presenting in engine. Even if this means choosing a concept that is smaller in scope. ✧ In future, make sure to fully explain your design choices in your documentation. ✧ I would recommend modelling your character in an A-pose with the arms down at about 45 degrees. This is more standard in games than the arms being so high up but not straight enough to be a T-pose. As you are in the Rising Star tier, I hope this feedback can be used to inform how you approach future university projects and I would love to see you take part in the competition again next year! You can find me on the social medias in the link below. Feel free to reach out in the future. All the best! https://draconic-cowboy.carrd.co/ - Tristan, Character Artist at Airship Interactive.

Challenge Tier

Rising Star

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