Judge feedback

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• Contestant: Joseph Taylor / @JTaylor1306 Assessor: Tristan McGuire / @Draconic_Cowboy Tier: Search For A Star Congrats on creating something for the competition! It is clear that this entry is unfinished, so feedback can only be quite limited. But I am so glad to see you did submit an entry. Things that went well: ✧ Creative interpretation of the theme. Things to consider next time: ✧ I assume the project is unfinished due to lack of time, so next time you do a project, ensure enough planning is done and time allocated to complete the project right through to making a game ready model and presenting in engine. ✧ When submitting work for grading, try to submit as many of the required files as you can. The deliverables here were a pdf doc and an Unreal scene. I understand that this project did not reach the Unreal stage, but you could have gotten higher scores by showing at least some documentation. ✧ Think closely about what emotion you are intending to evoke in the viewer. The fingers on this character read as very skeletal and therefore creepy, which contradicts the intended graceful nature. I hope this feedback proves useful and will help you with future projects and building your portfolio. You can find me on the social medias in the link below. Feel free to reach out in the future. All the best! https://draconic-cowboy.carrd.co/ - Tristan, Character Artist at Airship Interactive.