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A jam submission

Lonely TonyView project page

The War took all from Lonely Tony - Future Imperfect
Submitted by ConnorPrice123 — 2 days, 4 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Creative Development#373.0003.000
Research + Development#403.0003.000
Final Presentation#412.5002.500
Project Documentation#472.5002.500
Overall#472.6002.600
Technical / Workflow#482.0002.000

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • Contestant: @ConnorPrice123 Assessor: Tristan McGuire / @Draconic_Cowboy Tier: Search For A Star Congrats on creating something for the competition! It is clear that this entry is unfinished, so feedback can only be quite limited. But I am so glad to see you did submit an entry. Things that went well: ✧ Really nice work at the concept stage, with well established context and multiple iterations. Things to consider next time: ✧ Make sure when creating documentation that you explain any creative decisions made or challenges faced during the production stage. ✧ Next time you do a project, ensure enough planning is done and time allocated to complete the project right through to making a game ready model. Even if this means choosing a concept that is smaller in scope. ✧ Tale a close look at references of military trousers to help get the folds looking more realistic. I hope this feedback proves useful and will help you with future projects and building your portfolio. You can find me on the social medias in the link below. Feel free to reach out in the future. All the best! https://draconic-cowboy.carrd.co/ - Tristan, Character Artist at Airship Interactive.

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Search For A Star

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