Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

• Contestant: By Esmée Horler / @Esmee_Horler Assessor: Tristan McGuire / @Draconic_Cowboy Tier: Rising Star Congrats on creating something for the competition! It is clear that this entry is unfinished, so feedback can only be quite limited. But I am so glad to see you did submit an entry. I appreciate how difficult it is when unforeseen circumstances impact your work. Things that went well: ✧ Great to see the initial schedule that was planned out. ✧ Nice Marvelous Designer work. ✧ The clay renders are well lit and look professional. ✧ Documentation is detailed and well presented. Things to consider next time: ✧ Good thought has been put into the hand and knee topology, but next time make sure to pay extra attention to the face. Especially in regards to spacing the quads evenly over the surface. As you are in the Rising Star tier, I hope this feedback can be used to inform how you approach future university projects and I would love to see you take part in the competition again next year! You can find me on the social medias in the link below. Feel free to reach out in the future. All the best! https://draconic-cowboy.carrd.co/ - Tristan, Character Artist at Airship Interactive.
• Hi Esmee! I'm sorry to hear about the loss of your family member, I hope you and your loved ones are doing okay. Although you didn't finish your character, I am really impressed with the quality you have achieved in such a small timeframe! Your marvelous designer simulations were clean with a clear direction behind them. The workflow you complete in ZBrush is industry standard and ready to work in a studio-environment. Even better, your topology is well considered and the edge flow is well managed. I'm happy to say that I learnt a few things from your documentation too! I love the concept you drew and it's very refreshing to see a wonderfully weird and magic character in the Rising Star entries. I'm sorry that I don't have any critique at the moment, but I will be following your journey and I can't wait to see Phoebe completed! Keep it up :D