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A jam submission

MarionetteView project page

Spindly horror draped in silk. A fashionable monstrosity created for SFAS 2020.
Submitted by Callum Pogson (@Thanatoys) — 4 days, 6 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Technical#134.0004.000
Creative#214.0004.000
Overall#333.6003.600
Documentation#393.0003.000
Presentation#423.5003.500
Research + Development#443.5003.500

Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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  • Hi Callum, You have produced really good work here. I have no problem with the process either. It works very well and is industry standard. I have a few small tips. One, with modern day uv maps, you did it right, usually for AAA you can expect several materials therefore several uv maps. I don’t see any problem with yours, unless it was for mobile and therefore would need to cut back. But with that polygon count its safe to say it would be for pc or console. You did it right. Secondly, I have tried the cloth sim in Zbrush myself, its good, but as you may have noticed, Marvellous produces better results. It is sadly noticeable in your piece. But that’s really the only major issue I see. It’s a good piece, and after all a learning process. Judging by the process doc, you know where you need to improve yourself, such as retopo, but you also know a suprisng amount, I myself would bake those eyelashes separate, why waist a alpha on a whole texture. You did right. Uve are clean and nicely organised, easy enough for someone else to pick up if needed. To be honest, the character without the dress I could happily see in a game today. Anyway thank you for letting me view this, if you would like, add me on artstation and send me a message, it would be great to network and I can perhaps crit you with new work if you would like. Its Adam Vickerstaff Thank you Adam

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Submitted

I love this so much! I'm genuinely obsessed with this <3

Submitted

I absolutely love this design! You've nailed the creepy aesthetic so well. Also great job on the documentation, I loved watching your process unfold!