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A jam entry

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Submitted by Siver with 1 day, 4 minutes before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Research & development#14.6004.600
Documentation#14.6004.600
Presentation#14.4004.400
Overall#14.4404.440
Technical#24.4004.400
Creative#24.2004.200

Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • favourite so far.  Incredible range and technically astute.

  • Great documentation. Nice that you're working with a lot of feedback :). Modeling on the central blast furnace is really good. Modeling and lighting is nice and clean. Lots of technical skills shown. Lots of contrast on on parts which aren't the focal point of the scene (the furnace). Aside from that, great entry!

  • Really excellent work,  I can find very little to fault for a competition piece.

    The Document was a really good read showing your process and thoughts well, and the Poly-count links showed a good acceptance of feedback and improvement. The sketchfab models seemed good, your process seemed really solid. Well done.

    The base is there for a really solid final piece with a little more time. I'd spend a little more time on the Materials and then I think you have a great portfolio piece.

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