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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Documentation | #9 | 3.801 | 4.250 |
Overall | #11 | 3.578 | 4.000 |
Creative | #11 | 3.578 | 4.000 |
Technical | #13 | 3.578 | 4.000 |
Presentation | #14 | 3.354 | 3.750 |
Research & development | #15 | 3.578 | 4.000 |
Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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The barrels are too red-ish. The scene features good lighting, only a bit too dark. Good scene setup. I like the sculpting work, along with those stylized materials.
You've got very good modelling / sculpting / texturing abilities.
Really liked a lot of elements of this piece, It's got nice feel to it, You've got a good base to take a bit further and develop. You used techniques well and made some nice choices. You're report was good to read it showed you had a good understanding of what you were aiming for.
I'd take what you have and spend some time refining it into a good portfolio piece. The lighting as you say needs work. Theres also a few textures that just don't work imo, such as the blueish floor tiles. If you sort the minor pieces out you've got a nice piece for your portfolio.
Challenge Tier
Final Year & Masters students
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