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A jam entry

Search For A Star 2018 - ArthurView game page »

Entry for the 2018 Sumo Digital Search For A Star 2018
Submitted by CharlyBrownP with 5 days, 5 hours before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Documentation#232.9073.250
Presentation#282.4602.750
Technical#282.4602.750
Research & development#302.4602.750
Creative#312.2362.500
Overall#312.5042.800

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • The scene feels good, but overall the assets seem a little rushed, I'd suggest taking a little time to get the assets tighter, Improve their textures a little and you'll have a nice Scene.

  • documentation could have been optimised - images didn't need to be so hi-res/file size of document could have been MUCH smaller;)

  • The lighting and post production choices are too bold and contribute to kill what you wanted to achieve in the first place. There are too much contrasts, too much dark, and the colors are too saturated. It's a shame because the idea is good, and so are the assets. With better materials and a softer approach of the lighting, the scene would have been very interesting. You should continue working on it with a fresh eye.

Challenge Tier

Search For A Star

Final Year & Masters students

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