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Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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The lighting and post production choices are too bold and contribute to kill what you wanted to achieve in the first place. There are too much contrasts, too much dark, and the colors are too saturated. It's a shame because the idea is good, and so are the assets. With better materials and a softer approach of the lighting, the scene would have been very interesting. You should continue working on it with a fresh eye.
The scene feels good, but overall the assets seem a little rushed, I'd suggest taking a little time to get the assets tighter, Improve their textures a little and you'll have a nice Scene.
documentation could have been optimised - images didn't need to be so hi-res/file size of document could have been MUCH smaller;)
Final Year & Masters students
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