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A jam submission

First Day at Life GymView game page

First day on the job at a maternity gym.
Submitted by Axxisproductions — 1 day, 7 hours before the deadline
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Judge feedback

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  • 15th Place Score: (52/150)
  • One of the more branching, complex VN experiences of the jam. I was impressed by how many fully-modeled areas there were in the gym, each with their own little encounter in them as well. They gave the game a pretty good bit of replay value, making the player wonder what they could find around each corner. The 3D environment also helped to really make the gym feel like a proper establishment, giving a much more real feeling to the area itself. Unfortunately the art does drag the game down a tad, but it's nothing that continued training won't help fix, I'm sure. Overall a surprisingly lovingly made visual novel with more gameplay than most others.

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Submitted

A nice amount of dialogue there. I'm not that big of a reader, but still. Neat character art, with anthro characters everyone looks interesting and unique. Also quite interesting that the backgrounds were 3D modelled, I'm impressed.

Submitted

The breadth of choices is pretty impressive. The dialogue and theme were fun. It would’ve been nice to have more than 1 day so you could see how characters develop more. I will say, the art could be improved. Furry isn’t my cup of tea so I only went through 2 routes. I think the game is definitely held back by some aspects that make it hard for players to actually experience the more promising aspects of the game.