Otome Jam 2023

Innerlog jam comments

2023-06-29T15:54:36Z

I really liked the artstyle :)) However, I do wish that the game focused more on the murder plot since it seemed like an interesting concept for an otome game. Also, the writing was a bit all over the place, which I guess makes sense if your trying to write a manic character. Also the dialogue around serious topics, such as suicidal /self-deprecating thoughts and eating disorders, seemed superficial and shallow at times. I do appreciate the problems that the MC faces bc they're real problems that people have and may relate to. Because of this, I would have appreciated if topics such as suicidal thoughts was done with a bit more tact and attention instead of glossing over it with tacos. Overall I'm not trying to make a big deal out of it since I think the game was meant to be lighthearted and not to be taken seriously (or at I least I hope that it wasn't). I do not intend for this comment to be perceived as hateful in any way and I have major respect for anyone who can make a completed game in 2 months. I hope my comment was helpful in some way and I hope your future projects are successful :)