Very nice !

I love the way your music tells a story. Even without the commentary in your video we understand where we are going.

I like the change of tone when the hero is dead(?). It goes from D minor to Ebm.

The orchestration is great and the whole is very coherent.

But as I like to nitpick and we are also here to talk about the points on which we can progress, I would say that your themes and your melodies are at the same time a little too backward compared to the general harmony and that they are a little "messy". I took the time to listen several times to your creation and I think I understood why I have this feeling.

If you agree, I will post a more detailed explanation. Is that okay?

But I remind you that I find your music very very good.