Beautiful writing man. Such evocative little snaps of life. Doesn't feel contrite, comes off as natural, paints a picture while still moving a plot... Would love to be able to write like you do for my own game!
The definition of a good narrative based jam game. Story is short but earned & manages to fit a lot into a small amount of playtime. A great mood piece and what foibles are there are more dependent on the tech just being a bit rough rather than any structural issues from a story standpoint.