A browser Thing made in HTML5.
The narrative is really well done! I can feel the weight of feelings behind the short sentences the character --- the constant dishes underline the exhaustion.
Within the final line "it piles up", and really the entire last sequence, it reminds me of ignoring mental health and how it doesn't just resolve itself like the dishes piling in the sink --- it's only a matter of time before you can see the used dishes peeking out of the top of the sink, and by then something that would have taken a few small steps now feels like climbing a mountain. It's worth it to get through it in the end, but convincing yourself to take the first step even feels like an impossibility.
The art inside the bitsy is easy to read (the hallway, the kitchen), and having the kitchen sink be a distinct colour was an excellent choice! The shift in colour to the final sequence was also an excellent choice!! Colours draining to black and white seem to me like the pit someone may find themselves in if they are struggling with mental health, and something that is frequently described is having it feel as if there is no light, and the black-white thinking of 'if it isn't good now it will never get better'.
The prompt with 'loops' is well encapsulated too! Finding yourself stuck inside loops for those kinds of thinking generally causes them to fester and feeds hopelessness.
This is really well done! Absolutely deserving of 5/5 stars. (:
