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A jam submission

Magic Adventure IslandView game page

Submitted by Thomas.Tapr — 6 hours, 7 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Language (grammar and vocabulary)#2n/an/a
Number of words (300 words or less)#3n/an/a
Originality#93.8503.850
Gameplay#123.1003.100
Story#123.5503.550
Overall#123.5003.500

Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

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  • The story is cool but i would have preferred to have a button to go back to the beginning of the game.. and also pictures but the game is cool !
  • To make gameplay more natural, you should integrate choices in sentences. For exemple instead of this: Continue exploring -> [[Explore]] It would be better if you did it like this: Continue [[exploring]] Also, pay attention to your use of prepositions/phrasal verbs (for exemple "continue on" does not exist, it should be "continue").

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A good aventure