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Magic Adventure Island's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Language (grammar and vocabulary) | #2 | n/a | n/a |
| Number of words (300 words or less) | #3 | n/a | n/a |
| Originality | #9 | 3.850 | 3.850 |
| Gameplay | #12 | 3.100 | 3.100 |
| Story | #12 | 3.550 | 3.550 |
| Overall | #12 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- To make gameplay more natural, you should integrate choices in sentences. For exemple instead of this: Continue exploring -> [[Explore]] It would be better if you did it like this: Continue [[exploring]] Also, pay attention to your use of prepositions/phrasal verbs (for exemple "continue on" does not exist, it should be "continue").
- The story is cool but i would have preferred to have a button to go back to the beginning of the game.. and also pictures but the game is cool !
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