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A jam submission

Goblin Guild PdfView project page

Hero Quest PDF Adventure
Submitted by jacerj22 — 5 hours, 28 minutes before the deadline
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  • It's a clever twist to make a quest about training and seeking objects throughout your really nicely designed map - great work and the best of luck!
  • 1. Fun Factor (4.5/5) Engagement, Pacing, & Challenge: The quest is light-hearted and engaging, with the Goblin King's quirky treasure hunt adding charm. The legendary weapon inclusion heightens excitement. Its friendly pacing and moderate challenge make it suitable for a broad audience. 2. Design (4/5) Polish, Logic, & Flow: The layout is logical with clear objectives. The integration of the alchemist deck and mercenary hire promotes strategic resource management. However, more varied room designs and tactical diversity could enhance the flow. 3. Narrative (3.5/5) Immersion & Consistency: The whimsical story fits HeroQuest's style, but deeper lore, particularly around the Goblin Guild, would strengthen immersion. The quest maintains consistent thematic elements but could benefit from richer story arcs. 4. Staying Power (3/5) Replayability & Accessibility: While enjoyable, the linear structure limits replayability. Minor variations arise based on hero exploration order. Adding diverse objectives and monster encounters would improve its staying power. Overall Rating: 15/20 Feedback for the Creator: Strengths: Fun, accessible, and creatively integrates elements like the Goblin Apprentice and Spin Slash Sword. Beginner-friendly with well-maintained HeroQuest mechanics. Areas for Improvement: Increase varied monster encounters, enrich lore for deeper immersion, and diversify objectives beyond treasure hunts. Address minor grammatical issues for clarity. A commendable, imaginative quest that offers enjoyable gameplay—well done!

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Your blueprint for expanding Zargons dread is now being considered. The Darkness is pleased. 

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