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A jam submission

Sinistra's PrisonView project page

Who was Sinistra before she tried to seize the Realm from her sister?
Submitted by Patrick Garrett — 5 days, 13 hours before the deadline
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Judge feedback

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  • Overall Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐☆ (4/5 Stars) Fun Factor (5/5 Stars) Engagement: The dark narrative, intriguing villain Sinistra, and surprise elements like the mirrored portal keep players engrossed. Pacing: The quest maintains a dynamic flow with twists such as the escape tunnel leading deeper into Blackgate Prison. Challenge: Strong adversaries like Sinistra and Tormuk provide a satisfying level of difficulty without feeling insurmountable. Design (4/5 Stars) Polish: The quest is well-structured with creative mechanics—prisoner allies, klaxon-triggered events, and environmental details like the boot tile. Logic: Logical map flow and thoughtful area design, though the sudden klaxon and Zargon’s immediate turn can feel abrupt. Flow: Diverse paths (cells vs. armory) ensure fluid gameplay, though balancing Sinistra’s roaming abilities could improve fairness. Narrative (4/5 Stars) Immersion: Sinistra’s malevolence, her sister Terrellia’s backstory, and the grim setting create a compelling, immersive experience. Consistency: The lore integrates smoothly with HeroQuest’s universe, though slight grammatical tweaks could enhance clarity. Staying Power (4/5 Stars) Re-playability: Multiple routes, varied prisoner encounters, and random Dread Spells for Sinistra and Tormuk offer diverse replay experiences. Accessibility: While rich in detail, clarifying mechanics (e.g., prisoner armament, Sinistra’s door-opening abilities) would aid new players. Feedback to the Quest Creator: What Worked Well: Captivating lore with complex characters. Innovative mechanics, like prisoner allies and the klaxon event, enrich gameplay. Varied monster encounters maintain excitement. Areas for Improvement: Adjust Sinistra’s roaming powers for better balance. Clarify mechanics, such as managing multiple room contents and prisoner equipment. Minor grammatical refinements to improve readability. Final Thoughts: Sinistra's Prison is a standout fan-made quest with immersive storytelling and inventive mechanics. Minor balance and clarity tweaks could make it an even more polished addition to the HeroQuest community.
  • Zargon will has some extra capabilities in this quest - some really nicely designed game mechanics and narrative touches that make this a must-play quest, great work!

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Jam Host

Your blueprint for expanding Zargons dread is now being considered. The Darkness is pleased.